Thursday, 17 September 2015

Cross Country Recount

Cross Country Recount

WALT: write a recount about the Cross Country using effective paragraphs.
Topic: Cross Country.
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about your Cross Country experience.
Text type: Recount
Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, on cloud nine

Have you ever been to...
Wow! What an exciting …
Guess what? …
During the school holidays …
Last week...
Helpful Links: Brainstorm


P1: Introduction: Who? When? Where? Why?

P2: What happened? Why/How?

P3: What happened next? Why/How?

P4: Conclusion: What happened in the end?
How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?
Once you have finished make sure to mark with a buddy or yourself using our PARAGRAPH RUBRIC. Draw an image that represents your writing in sumo paint or ABC paint.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    On a hot sunny day We ran on the field And then I got knocked over  but I got back up by then I was about coming last so I sprinted I got tired and started to walk and the  I ran as fast as I could it was muddy but luckily I didn’t get muddy. then I had to run across the reserve and I saw david in front of me and jonathan at the back  jonathan got in front of me and david had already passed the finish line david didn’t come first he came 11th I came 13th and jonathan came 12th in the end we had a drink of water and we watching the other years race  

Last Monday on the 7th of september, we had cross country and we had to wait  then  all of the year 5 boys lined up the, whole school and family members staff the community where watching  
We ran around the pt england reserve then we ran through the playground  then we won.

Then we had a drink of water, then we watched the rest of the people run.

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