Thursday 20 October 2016

Nate Narrative Writing


One day Rick and Noah Went on  a walk and saw a very old broken building  they just stared at it for a while then Noah said  it's Creepy Rick replied saying I wanna go in said.


They decided to go inside but Rick made Noah come in Then as they go around the house they see a door Noah said holy moly I am not going in there Rick replied yes you are.

They tried to go inside but the door was locked Rick said ok I guess we're gonna go the hard way and kicked the door Noah said well that was smart Rick.
 They both hear footsteps from inside Noah said Nope I am not going in there Rick said come on Noah said fine as long as we don’t go in this way.

Rick kicked the door again and it broke down Stacks of crates Noah said why did you do that Rick replied with Because there was a crowbar on the floor Rick said Bing Go and picked it up and plied one of the crates open Rick said holy smokes its money and lots of it Noah said let me see Rick said See then they hear running from upstairs Rick says Get Some Money!
They both grab a hand full of cash and run for it then they both hid in a bush Ouch! Noah had landed on a sharp stick

then they both hear Two pairs of footsteps coming towards them they got up and run they see Two huge men with masks on They just stared at them Not doing anything they ran home.


They come back a few months later and find the door still broken but nothing inside the room where the crates were.