Thursday 20 October 2016

Nate Narrative Writing


One day Rick and Noah Went on  a walk and saw a very old broken building  they just stared at it for a while then Noah said  it's Creepy Rick replied saying I wanna go in said.


They decided to go inside but Rick made Noah come in Then as they go around the house they see a door Noah said holy moly I am not going in there Rick replied yes you are.

They tried to go inside but the door was locked Rick said ok I guess we're gonna go the hard way and kicked the door Noah said well that was smart Rick.
 They both hear footsteps from inside Noah said Nope I am not going in there Rick said come on Noah said fine as long as we don’t go in this way.

Rick kicked the door again and it broke down Stacks of crates Noah said why did you do that Rick replied with Because there was a crowbar on the floor Rick said Bing Go and picked it up and plied one of the crates open Rick said holy smokes its money and lots of it Noah said let me see Rick said See then they hear running from upstairs Rick says Get Some Money!
They both grab a hand full of cash and run for it then they both hid in a bush Ouch! Noah had landed on a sharp stick

then they both hear Two pairs of footsteps coming towards them they got up and run they see Two huge men with masks on They just stared at them Not doing anything they ran home.


They come back a few months later and find the door still broken but nothing inside the room where the crates were.


Friday 1 April 2016

Year 5&6 Camp 2016



:Walt I am writing about Camp and the actives that we did.

On the first day of camp we my group did top town it was really fun we were told to go and fill up the water balloons.
 When we're ready put them next to the others teams waters balloons at the end near the end we started to throw the balloons at the kind kings.
And then at the end we raised the flag when all of our team had got on the sheet on the ground and we won.

Friday 4 March 2016

Duffy Show

On one fine day the duffy show came to see of school pt england. Duffy a the boy he time traveled to save an old ladys dad he was in the 90s her dad was shot, The last photo of her dad was him writing a letter for his daughter and then the enemy came into the room, but duffy jumped in front of the bullet and saved the old ladys dad but he didn’t know that he did. He went back in time and went home disappointed but when he got home the old lady said thank you and hugged him.